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Shurikane
Dim Panties As String
Joined: 24 Sep 2002 |
 Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 11:33 pm Post subject: Beta readers for 7 page document wanted. |
I've prepared a file on civilizations based in a fictional universe and want to make them as believable as possible. Therefore, if anybody's willing, read through the document and point out anything that doesn't seem right in the concept. Because it was written over the span of three months, a good couple of self-contradictions may have slipped in.
http://www.shurikane.com/Cultures.doc |
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