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Bekuki
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 9:37 am    Post subject: -Never-

Besides the End of the Joureny-this is proboly the best poem I've EVER written.

-Never-

Listen world,
Don't you hear?
The mournful, wounded cries
Of the Children of Silence?
Of course you can't.
The only thing you need to be worried about is yourselves.
Nothing else.
Leaving us, the Children of Silence,
To remain in silence.
To suffer.
Forever.

Among the endless sea of faces,
We are amoung you.
Hidden in every nook and crany,
The ones that don't fit,
The ones they didn't want.
We are, and will always be,
The Forgotten Ones.
There is no hope for us.

We are alone,
In an eternal, perpetual winter.
A place where white never ends.
A cold, cold world.
Filled with cold faces,
And even colder hearts.
We are the Children of the Ice.
Frozen over like the Poles.

We are lost and never found,
No one even bothered looking.
We are the ones you only see from the corner of your eyes.
And then we're gone
Like we were never even there.
We are the Lost Ones
Held in cold, lifeless lives.

We are the ones they can't hear.
We are the ones they've forgotten.
We are the ones they ice over.
We are the ones who can't be found.
We are the ones the world forgets.
We are the ones who slip thourgh the cracks.
Like we were never even there....
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Zinka
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 8:58 pm    Post subject:

wow...I'm not really a poetry person and I'm not very good at judging it but this seems really good. I like it's melancholy tone....
^.^ nice...I'll have to look for some of your other poetry.

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