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Kiyomi
Adopted sis to Alexander and Sperrit
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Joined: 15 Oct 2003 |
 Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 10:07 pm Post subject: Okay, le me know what you think. A song a wrote and sang. |
It's called "A Bit Crazy". Excel is my inspiration for the song, and it is actually written for him and about us. Bear in mind there are no instruments to back it up, it is just voice.
http://www.tsukiyo.org/Singing/abitcrazy.wav |
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The great and confused Kiyomi, cat girl with an obsession for rabbits and genetics! #1 fan and wife of Excel.
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Zane
Otaku Knight
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Joined: 21 Apr 2003 |
| Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 11:23 pm Post subject: |
Whoa, that was amazing. Add some background music and I smell demo. |
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Faye
Luna Sierra
Age: 42
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Joined: 28 Apr 2004 |
| Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 11:46 pm Post subject: |
Sw33t 4ct10n!!! Very awesome song and, of course, the vocals are awesome too. I'm with Zane, all you need is some background music and you've got yourself a demo. |
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Kiyomi
Adopted sis to Alexander and Sperrit
Gender:
Joined: 15 Oct 2003 |
| Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 11:52 pm Post subject: |
Well, we are looking at a really sweet keyboard right now. It is like $900, but it has all the keys a piano has (most are shorter), can mix like crazy, has instrumental sounds built in (and they really sound like the real instrument), built in piano lessons, a recording studio (so you can actually use the keyboard to record), and all that jazz. It's just a matter of saving up for it. Then we have to save up for the vocal recorder, too, of course.
Thanks for the compliments, btw. You guys are not over exaggerating, are you? I really need the honest truth on this. |
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The great and confused Kiyomi, cat girl with an obsession for rabbits and genetics! #1 fan and wife of Excel.
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Minosheep
Doesn't get a custom rank.
Age: 36
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Joined: 27 Oct 2002 |
| Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2004 12:15 am Post subject: |
You have a wonderful voice, and this song this has a good rhythm. Around the chorus, it does seem to stray from being quite so rhythmic, but with music it might sound better. |
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Faye
Luna Sierra
Age: 42
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Joined: 28 Apr 2004 |
| Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2004 12:15 am Post subject: |
I am no expert on music and I cant sing worth a damn. But I know what I like, and I thought your song was awesome.
Perhaps one of our more musically inclined PO's will be able to critique(SP?) you a little better. |
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kei
巡る 時 屁と 輝き 進もう
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Joined: 18 Oct 2004 |
| Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2004 12:42 am Post subject: Re: Okay, le me know what you think. A song a wrote and sang |
| Kiyomi wrote: | It's called "A Bit Crazy". Excel is my inspiration for the song, and it is actually written for him and about us. Bear in mind there are no instruments to back it up, it is just voice.
http://www.tsukiyo.org/Singing/abitcrazy.wav |
 that was bueatiful Kiyomi, i can't say anything more i'm speachless. |
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Wandabastyle Katana (Sword)
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Kiyomi
Adopted sis to Alexander and Sperrit
Gender:
Joined: 15 Oct 2003 |
| Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2004 12:59 am Post subject: |
Thanks everyone, especially minoship for pointing out a possible problem. Only way I can fix things is to get constructive criticism.  |
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The great and confused Kiyomi, cat girl with an obsession for rabbits and genetics! #1 fan and wife of Excel.
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