| Did you enjoy this comic story arc? |
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| My character wasn't in it so I didn't like it |
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FawkesFyre
Saving the World, one Kitty at a Time
Age: 46
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Joined: 28 Sep 2006 |
 Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 6:16 pm Post subject: |
As an overall vote, I thought it was great.
The nitty gritty: I was hoping for it to progress further and faster. The story seemed to get stuck once they got through the introductions with Nacht and Rev, and then it just ended.
As much as I liked the running gag about Shino hearing voices, I think it was overdone a bit....AND PRG heard the voice the first time as well when she says: "Is that what doom sounds like".
But don't get me wrong, I thought that the comic was great. I loved the premise, the story, and the design...and the puns...we must not forget the kudos for the puns.
Nice job! I want to see more! |
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Ultrawolf
Mr. Roarke
Gender: 
Joined: 04 Jul 2003 |
| Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 7:20 pm Post subject: |
I thought it was good as an introductory story arc. Kind of like "Session 1" of the DnD games. Ideally I would like to see this revisited sometime, either as the next major arc or down the line. Maybe introduce some new DnDers or swap some. Of course, like everyone else, I enjoyed the frequent updates and hope we can keep it up.
I also agree with more joke variety. I liked the Shino-delirium thing but I think it got overused just a bit, it would be better to throw that into the background and mix it up with other punchlines. Some of the best comics have ongoing jokes like that but of course not in EVERY single comic. Y'know? |
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GAAZ
MOD Black Sheep Commander
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| Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 7:30 pm Post subject: |
| FawkesFyre wrote: |
As much as I liked the running gag about Shino hearing voices, I think it was overdone a bit....AND PRG heard the voice the first time as well when she says: "Is that what doom sounds like".
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PRG never heard the voices SHino was talking about then and Nacht started laughing off-screen.
Yes the voices thing was over-used but I hate Shino so whatever makes him look bad. 
DND will be revisited the reason it ended quickly was because the encounter was over. When revisited there will be more fodder to throw into the mix and ummm...Stuff.
Weeeeee!
Don't worry, no DnD for like another 3 months. |
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Minosheep
Doesn't get a custom rank.
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| Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 1:50 am Post subject: |
There weren't enough sheep. And Nacht managed to make an appearance without a certain brother who likes to meddle with her plans just to annoy her!
Seriously, though, it was entertaining, if a bit corny at times. You'll get better as time goes on, so I look forward to the future of the comic. |
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Jolly Roger
Senior Otaku
Age: 287
Joined: 04 Mar 2004 |
| Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:13 am Post subject: |
Where be the epic doom? And the plunderin' o' loot? And the drinkin' o' grog with some fine lasses?
At least Shine-O get a good jabbin'. That lobster deserves it, and it be me favorite part.
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Shino
Fade into this fantasy, caught in the web of time
Age: 49
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| Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:53 am Post subject: |
| Jolly Roger wrote: | At least Shine-O get a good jabbin'. That lobster deserves it, and it be me favorite part.
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Watch it boney, or I'll put in word filters to make all your words show up as regular English!  |
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RivaOni
Full English!
Age: 41
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| Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 6:51 am Post subject: |
Bit off topic here but, Jolly Roger fluffing RULES!
I enjoyed the comic, I liked the art style of it, maybe the voices were over used but Shino's not exactly gonna stop hearing them is he? they're not just gonna dissappear, not without some sort of counselling...
I'd like to see Riva appear at some point but then I suppose everyone would like their character to be used. |
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