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Zinka
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 Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 1:15 am Post subject: Random sketch but looking for comment... |
Well..this is a random sketch which is partially for my brother-to motivate his butt into writing our story and partially for me to practice putting characters into setting.
It's fairly simple but I rather suck at perspective and backgrounds so I'd love feedback...
it's also really rough...I really cant not sketch this way so I apologize if its hard to make out. I do realize the guy is like huge...his legs are too long but other than that he's supposed to be much larger than the girl....
in case you cant really see it well
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this is another practice...mostly of inking though. I'm also trying to color it but it's such a pain...
once again, if its too small...
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FawkesFyre
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| Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 12:41 pm Post subject: |
I like it a lot but those background marks everywhere on the walls distract from the actual picture. The details are really great though, reminds me of a random anime scene. |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 1:13 pm Post subject: |
i like them both lots. What is tough about them is (as you said) the markings everywhere. I see that the littel girl had several different poses to her before you decided on the one in the picture.
It's still 100 flippen times better than anything i could ever draw. But hey, we all have our strengths
And the "Holy" chick is teh awesome. Very nicely done. |
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Zinka
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| Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 6:04 pm Post subject: |
^.^
Yeah, the markings would probably get cleaned up in an inking ob if I ever did one...I'm such a messy sketcher
thanks you guys!
and, the holy girl I drew while I was listening to that song "good time" by leroy, if you know it^.^ |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 6:23 pm Post subject: |
すごい貴方、私はそれを好む！
That is awesome zinka.  |
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| Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 8:06 pm Post subject: |
O____O wowness.
I like all of the details. And the scene at the top, everything looks so natural. ^^ |
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Zinka
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| Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 10:09 am Post subject: |
| ScrumYummy wrote: | O____O wowness.
I like all of the details. And the scene at the top, everything looks so natural. ^^ |
thanks! that means a lot...I really worked a lot on figuring it out...
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here's the inking I did today....
because they get small
Well..I think I like the sketch better. I'm trying to be patient with inking but its really not easy for me...I don't know how I'll ever get through coloring once I start practicing that more^.^ I do plan on coloring this one...eventually^.^ |
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| Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 5:31 am Post subject: |
Hehe, I like the variety in style. The first one looks fun, like a comic. The second one reminds me of Aeon Flux, and the third one's got some great dynamics going on ^__^
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| Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 10:34 pm Post subject: |
You are gift ^_^ I wish I could draw as good. |
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Zinka
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| Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 12:07 am Post subject: |
thanks guys...
you know, I should probably watch aeon flux...I've known about it forever and never gotten around to it
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