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Bumblebee
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 26, 2003 9:48 pm    Post subject:

OKAY. OKAY. DAMN this computer. This is the FOURTH time I've had to try and post this thread. FOURTH TIME. I'm going to go NUTS if I have to break into a fifth.

Okay...
So this comic is going to be centered around ANOTHER UNIVERSE in which the PO world has been practically destroyed. The Metal and Earth are both ONE element(called MetalEarth, hehe...creative, I am not), and basically elemental power is HALF as strong as it is in OUR PO world.

Blah blah...lemme post this and then I'll start with the sketches and stuff.


This is an ongoing thread where I will put in sketches of the characters as I continue.
I JUST WANT TO POST THIS SO I CAN CONTINUE IT, damn computer.

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 26, 2003 10:31 pm    Post subject:

OKAY!
With that posted, I can post the ACTUAL MEAT of this stuff.
First off, five sketches of a few characters in this comic. (thanks to PRG for names and background stuffs!)

KEEP IN MIND that EVERYTHING is changed. Good guys might be bad guys, bad guys might be good; some PO's are dead, some are cyborgs, etc. etc.
Also, Poo Ting is the ruler of this world. The place is basically DESTROYED, and the "good guys" don't carry the morals that OUR Universe's PO's do. Gah...I'll post info on each character sketch and go into the universes afterwards.
(C&C as well as questions are encouraged).

FIRST UP. One of Poo Ting's heavy hitters:
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( http://www.angelrift.net/powermegaman/ausperrit.jpg )

SPERRIT! (Whaaaaa?!?!). Yes, Sperrit. Poo Ting has managed to Convince the guy to join him. (But Sperrit would never do that!), no, no he would. This is an ALTERNATE universe. Keep in mind, OUR Sperrit will meet THIS Sperrit in this story line.
So yeah. Sperrit is an evil guy in this AU(alternate universe).
See that egg encased in that organic'y substance? That be Gira, yeaargh, matey.
That's why Sperrit is evil. Poo Ting encased Gira in an Earth Egg(name pending) and now Sperrit fights to free Gira. Only problem is that he's got those funky eyes all over him. Those eyes are slowly turning him evil- but he doesn't know that. Poo Ting told him that the eyes are actually "power enhancers", since it's well known that an elemental has half his or her own power on (this) Minipoia.

I'll go more about Sperrit later.

NEXT! Faust's partner in crime...
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( http://www.angelrift.net/powermegaman/aupickles.jpg )

PICKLES! WAHAHAHA. FAUST?! Who is that? That is the name of the man who used to own Pickles- but he was murdered by Sakura. Pickles can only respond if his owner is Faust so, being a clever little assassin, Sakura calls herself "Faust" as to not confuse Pickles. (in the sketches, Pickles has two forms; his holographic bear form(the one with the BIG eyes) and his robotic form(the last two sketches on the page)
The bear form is just a ploy to look harmless. Not only does the hologram look like a real teddy bear, but by emitting small, irregular vibrations that coat his metallic body, he can actually FEEL like a real teddy bear. When he's in this mode, he cannot fight. The bear state is only to recharge himself.
In Robot mode(after the hologram is taken away), Faust can summon any of Pickles ten weaponry techniques: right and left fist missles, the X-Striker( an x-laser that is hidden inside his forehead casing), necksaw(three rotating blades spring from his neck), the W-Striker(a technique where Pickles can emit an electrical field around him(about a good mile radius; not too long) and shoot a beam of concentrated wind thin enough that it explodes electricly charged particles in the air creating an incredibly thin laser invisible to the human eye).
Pickles can also shoot regular beams out his eyes, send out a painful scream(that can render a human opponent deaf for a little more than 24 hours); poison gas, tear gas, light bombs, and a powerful self-destruct sequence are also in his weapons inventory.
Pickles will ONLY listen to Faust( his programing has been reassigned to recognize Sakura's physical appearance as Faust).

Also note- the sketches are all concepts for Pickles. Most that were dropped x_x.

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 27, 2003 11:25 am    Post subject:

Mwa haha very cool...I like it :3 Can't wait to see more!

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 27, 2003 1:22 pm    Post subject:

Instead of metalearth how about calling it meta earth.

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 27, 2003 2:56 pm    Post subject:

Yah, I was gonna use "MetaEarth", but it sounds like "Medaearth", which could be confused as a Medabot, lol.
That and MetalEarth was much more to-the-point.

MORE SKETCHES( I hope these will come up without freezing the comp...)

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( http://www.angelrift.net/powermegaman/auprg.jpg )

The all-famous Punk Rock Girl! Man...this is the second time I've attempted THIS POST...waaagh. PRG's name in this reality is "Ed", short for "Eden"; she sports a power suit that enhances her organic-MetalEarth powers; but since physical, naturally existing elements(water and earth) are very weak from technical-planet takeover, all elements learn how to use wind or fire- the only two elements(other than light/dark) that aren't artificial on the planet.
Eden is an ex-assassin. She used to be in the same all-female clan as Sciler(new name pending), Doot, and Sakura(now Faust)- but Eden dropped out because of a growing distaste of murder-for-pay. She prefered to kill someone in the name of justice, and not in the name of money. Other than MetalEarth and wind abilities, Eden is trained in a very stealth form of combat(name pending) and has one star-earing on her left ear that is a bomb(that can only be set off by her using a certain key-phrase). The "star bomb" causes a dimensional rip that can send anything in a three foot radius into a hellish dimension known as "the Void".

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( http://www.angelrift.net/powermegaman/audoot.jpg )

After seeing the smile on her sister's face during the carnage of a mission, Doot cheers up. Faust is the only person Doot will willingly accept because of blood relations. However, if Doot were given a job to kill her sister- she would act without hesitation.
Unlike the Doot of our Miniopia, Doot has a very evil side that shows out a lot. The weak have no place in this world; those who cannot fight need to be killed. Chibi Knight and Sciler(names pending) take it up to themselves to calm Doot down when she goes off killing people in the name of "Survival of the Fittest".
For as long as she was born, this galla's only seen death. She's seen friend's become enemies, and enemies become even worse enemies.
Doot lost her arm and eye in an early battle with Poo Ting. She managed to slice Poo Ting's body in two- before Poo Ting destroyed her powerful blade and summoned reinforcements. Chibi Knight- a cyborg -aided in making artificial limbs for Doot along with Zeus(Aindriahnn((sp?)) ). They did this to keep Doot from going on a homicidal rampage- to prove she was still capable of fighting despite the missing limb and eye.
Because of the cyborg attatchments and Doots strong fire-taming skill, she is EXTREMELY dangerous when provoked. She has a foul mouth too, lol.
Even though she has a variety of techniques and artillery/weaponry to take care of her opponents, she prefers to just punch their heads off.

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http://www.angelrift.net/powermegaman/audmb.jpg

Dye Mooch is the most powerful elemental being on what used to be his planet; the moon of Bombus(where Bumblebee came from). Dye Mooch was caught by the Queen during an espionage assignment, and had both his forearms cut off as punishment for snooping around royal territory. DM had learned his lesson..
PSHT! Yeah right. Using a strong control over the elements, he created new forearms with a diamond-like crystal power channeling system. He used sharp connection points to stab these forearms into his upper arms and, with these new crystal engery releases, he threw the wires of the cybernetic attachments throughout his muscle tissue- perminately connecting the arms to his entire body. Basically his arm is as "good as new" or something.
Bumblebee, just a kid at this time, was also an acting agent with DM. Bumble's father was councelor to the Queen, and his mother was a "royal librarian" of sorts. This gave Bumblebee access to ALL documents; those viewable and hidden from the public. From his reading, he's become a great mechanicals expert, and built a ship for his family and the Mooches to leave on; but the Mooches became drunken with power and turned on their brother Dye Mooch. The Queen learned of the escape plan and immediately murdered Bumblebee's parents while they were kissing their son to bed. Dye Mooch (who was hiding in Bumblebee's house), took Bumblebee before he could be harmed.
DM- having contacts with Chibi Knight(name pending) -was given the "okay" to come to Miniopia and hide out with them. Bumblebee and Zeus work together on a lot of mechanical objects; meanwhile Dye Mooch tries to play 'suave' and hits on all the women of the resistance movement. Hey, he's a monkey! You gotta get some sometime...lol.


ALRIGHTY! I have Sciler, Shino, Reaper(form 1 and form 2) and Gryph coming up next! : D Woot. I am particularly happy with Sciler's design.
Yep yep.

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 27, 2003 5:26 pm    Post subject:

wow bee!! thats great!! i love seeing the character designs and everything pan out and of course i LOVE my design.. i also love sperrit's but you know that.. the organic armour is just too cool!

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 27, 2003 7:46 pm    Post subject:

Looks good. Sounds like it will be fun to do.

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 27, 2003 9:26 pm    Post subject:

Yah, this all looks very cool!

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 27, 2003 10:32 pm    Post subject:

AND!!! There's more.

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( http://www.angelrift.net/powermegaman/augryphreaper01.jpg )

This one's a two-for! The one on the left is Gryph and the one on the right is Reaper in his first form.

Gryph, being part of a crime fighting task force on his original planet, fights for justice, and joined the resistance because of the awful state that Miniopia evolved into.
Because of Gryph and the Force-Brigade(the team he used to belong to until a mission separated them throughout the universe), the planet of Miniopia has the artificial gravity unit that's keeping the moon from flying off. For such a big accomplishment, one would assume Gryph would be a hero...but no. Because of a rogue squad of anti-heroes(I know, I coulda just said VILLAINS), propaganda with false evidence that the Force-Brigade was released that gave the illusion of the F-B being in alliance with Poo Ting. Only the resitance knows it was to save the planet.

Reaper 01

There are three people directly connected with "the Void": Ming, Reaper and AzVegeta(new name pending). These three are, what they like to be call, the "Population Control Movement". No name for the group(yet- though suggestions would be cool).
Reaper, like all the others in the PCM, has two forms. A casual, non threatening form(seen here).
Reaper used to be a regular guy on Miniopia until he was recruited by AzVegeta to help take down Poo Ting and rule Miniopia for himself. Problem is that Reaper is a "loner". He dislikes orders, and will PURPOSELY screw up an assignment(such as killing Otakus NOT on the PCM's bounty-list).
Reaper has a human form frozen in animation in the restistance headquarters- as well as the other PCM members.

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( http://www.angelrift.net/powermegaman/aureaper02.jpg )

Reaper 02

When challenged into combat, Reaper summons the aid of a Void Beast(a skull-headed snake creature) and fuses himself within the creature to take on an opponent.
Reaper and the other PCM members are the ONLY Otakus that can control the rare element of Life. They can take it or give it almost instantely- but they avoid using this elemental strength until the opponent is almost near it's last breathe.
Reaper's main weapon in his fighting mode is his tail-blade.

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( http://www.angelrift.net/powermegaman/aushinosciler.jpg )

Another two-for-one!
Sciler and Shino.

Sciler is basically an assassin who loves to "torture" her victims before killing them. She carries a plasma gun that is actually quite useless against Poo Ting's army. She has it for sentimental value and rarely will ever use it.
Her actual weapon of choice is her laser-whip. The handle sends out a heated reverse wind pattern into the whip's main section(just above the handle), and heats the crystal orb there. The orb(name pending) sends an immense amount of telekenetic energy that creates a negative reaction with the wind-patterns, causing them to cut light and atomic particles creating the laser nine-tails. A very strong weapon that can literally cause air to explode if struck any faster then a slight swing.

Shino is...well...an agent working for Poo Ting. I haven't quite worked out his details or story yet(just like Sciler...). ..so I'll come up with that one for the next sketch update.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 27, 2003 11:27 pm    Post subject:

That's sooooo cool! I'm now the greatest hero in two universes. Very Happy

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